Firsts things first, teach me how to say "fuck yo momma"
Being serious about it though, this looks like a bit of effort so props to you.
I've seen a few half arsed attempts, where it was created around the dialogue in the book and doesn't stand up to scrutiny instead of the language it being it's own entity.
Based on your chart, yours seems like the latter.
The main point I wanted to ask is how do you go about getting started without feeling like you are copying what exists already?
Do you embrace influence or try and go abstract with it?